Tuesday, April 13, 2010

A House on Clover Street.

Thanks Star-Fish!


Jojo and Marcus Crane stood in front of their house, their past, they were moving on. As they stood arm in arm looking up at the massive three story home they had lived in for the past 15 years, a home they built from the ground up, a home they raised their children in, a home they fought, cried, but above all loved in, their parting was bittersweet. The Crane's would take with them those wonderful memories as they moved to a house on Clover street.

Clover street was in a newer part of town, the answer to the over crowding schools, parks, and stores in their current neighborhood. Years ago, everyone flocked to Mill Town because it boasted to be the all American town that every other nearby neighborhood promised to be but some how fell short. Mill Town got it right, so every couple with the hopes of raising a family in a nice, safe neighborhood came to Mill Town, and they came and came and didn't stop coming until the town was filled to capacity and the Town Association had to do something so decided to build more, but they would so it even better this time.

They named it Mill Mount because they had to build higher and this new section truly did reach new heights and did not disappoint. Everyone who saw the appeal of the original Mill Town saw Mill Mount as their savior, the relief that their old town desperately needed.

The Cranes had out lived their old house, with their children grown and moved out, they needed a smaller space and found their perfection on Clover Street.

10 comments:

Unknown said...

Hey, you wrote me months ago about your blog and writing serial fiction--if I've found the correct blog. I couldn't find it when you wrote.
I like the piece above. I don't know if it's part of a serial or a flash fiction. It's a good beginning to a longer piece or an excellent snapshot, which would be an excellent way in.
Diary of a Heretic
http://www.diaryofaheretic.com

Joshua said...

Thanks for the information

jean louis mercier said...

salut viens voir mon blog et poste moi un commentaire j'essaye de montrer mes oeuvre merci d'avance

distanthues said...

It's bittersweet. Short, but it captures their feelings. I like it.

bloggers said...

Thanks for the information

Unknown said...

it is very good site for advertisment
www.adskidunya.com

123 said...

red bottom shoes Now there is Red Bottom Shoes a acceptable choice!The block abate boots are actual accepted in this abatement and winter. Christian Louboutin has abounding kinds of this boots.And again you can bout with a awakening handbag.Until the 1213 century,the Japanese accept a Japanese appearance sandals clogs in straw, copse and covering as raw materialsand blow toe slippers.In the rainy,boiling areas,women in accurate like to abrasion clogs, shoes with red bottom because not alone act as elastic boots,and abrasion athletic acceptable and inexpensive.So in a actual continued time, clog seems to be alike with Japanese women.

retrotouch213 said...

Wow!! What's a Nice blog sharing..Please visit on these keywords for remote light switch :-- led downlights | remote switches | touch dimmer | switches and sockets | led lighting | rocker light switches

Unknown said...

Hello,

This is really useful article.
If you have free time, don't hesitate to visit my blog http://www.webmastersun.com :)

Unknown said...

good

Post a Comment